Saturday 30 November 2013

NARRATIVE (DEVELOPED)

It's a winter day, and some of the sixth form students are free in the common room. A group of 4 girls and 2 boys are sitting in the main seating area. This group are the most popular of the year, and seen as 'elite' from their fellow pupils. One girl, who is of a dark nature and always, sits in the isolated area at the back of the common room, with a clear view of the elite group. With the elite group there is a couple (boy and girl, Jamal and Taylor). The dark natured girl (Genner) is always looking out for J&T, as she has a crush on J. The rest of this elite group mock G, as they know she has a crush on J. A slight hint of bullying will occur, this will not be brutal but real, name calling, pushing in the hallways and hints of teasing will be present. This will take place of a period of time. One day the bullying is taken a step further as the elite group get hold of G’s phone number and tell her that J is actually interested in her, so they arrange a meeting place which is a park/ isolated area with a bridge (connotations of a bridge are present). The elite group minus J&J are at this isolated area but are hidden behind a tree, awaiting G's arrival, they film her using the camera phones to show her reaction so that they use it as a funny pranks when they  let her know that they set her up. However this does not go to plan breaking the equilibrium. When G receives the disturbing text message, she feels distraught. She unexpectedly reveals a photograph of J&T and rips it, setting alight to one half. The elite group are shocked, but are still filming. G then breaks down and commits suicide due to her feeling she cannot bear this humiliation. The elite now have evidence of G taking her life so they burn the phone so that all evidence will be destroyed because they do not want anyone to know they have been involved in a serious crime. Once they at school they let J&T know what had happened, everyone agrees to let it go and move on. Within the next week strange things occur, elements that show that G's spirit is with the group.


Later on in the week the whole group are just walking through the school building and all of a sudden the doors lock, the lights turn off and there is no escape. Each character scared and screaming, they notice a change in J; his eyes have changed colour and his voice completely different. Suddenly he starts announcing 'I know what you did, you killed me ' etc., which eventually lead the terrified group to believe he has been possessed by G. Creating the recognition of disruption. J, being possessed by G tries to scar each member of the group as revenge for her constant bullying and trauma, she wants them to feel the wrath of her, and know how much it hurts whether it be mentally or physically. One by one there are dilemmas where J (possessed by G) is one to one with each member of the group either killing them, or violently hurting them in order for them to always know and remember that they have been hurt by them. After taking on the group, J then finds his way to his girlfriend J, who G wants to kill as she has the one thing that G was never able to have. J does not want this to happen as J is his high school sweetheart, he then has a plan if G is determined to kill J he would rather die than his girlfriend. An attempt to repair the damage will now take place, the characters attempt to get to the school chapel, in order to connect with God and ask for forgiveness but they are trapped and unable to get out. Now there is a visual change from G to J, back and forth continuously as J does not want to kill his girlfriend (T). In the end, he decides to kill himself; there is a visual fight between all three characters. Where the audience are able to see just how hard the fight between J and G's possessive force is. In the end J commits suicide, in able to kill the possession of G as well as himself. This kills the force and J's character leaving the rest of the characters distraught, and the building then becomes unlocked. The last shot for the audience is the left over image, of the half of the picture that G ripped up but did not burn, which will show the face off... Forming the new equilibrium.

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